Calicien 4 years 4 months ago wrote:

It's my first time to write a song. I wrote it, played it, sang it, and recorded it just this 3pm!

I need second opinion.. Hahaha... I hope you like the song.

Here is the download link -- CLICK MEEE

Lyrics:
tonight, i write all the sad lines
my mind, drowning in blank signs
with my tears, slipping and falling
i'm singing, i'm feeling tonight

the wind, whispers each footstep
we're walking, and shouting till we're deaf
i'm hiding, and hating, screaming
and fighting, i'm weeping tonight

Chorus:
With each rain drop, i'm killing tomorrow
let me touch you, let me touch
Can you feel, Ferisse's wheel...

talk to me, voices that echo
stop my head, teach me to let go
with my tears, slipping and falling
and fighting, i'm weeping tonight

Runagi 4 years 4 months ago wrote:

It sounds good enough. But it sounds like there is more than one person singing. Edit: My friend heard it and he said "hot"... whatever that means.

Calicien 4 years 4 months ago wrote:

Yeah. I played the rhythm guitar, the lead vocal, and second voice, and the poser little itsy bitsy lead guitar. Tried to do track recording, so non-pro.. Ehehehe


P.S. - Thank you for giving time to listen to it! My friend said I should transpose it a key higher... Hehehe.. Might take his advice. I'm still not good at things like this... Testing...Testing...