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Guys this my project in skul and and its due date would be next week, before i pass this one, i need your comments guys so that i could be sure that ill be passing a hi quality project.
please help me
My first written story, please read this one guys and comment ^ ^ its my skull project.
The Sun Religion
By: Israel
Most of my brothers are full of goodness, full of sacredness, devoutness and piety but I never wanted to be one of them, they insult me, they are rude, they upset my feelings because they think I am an idiot, ignorant and empty minded. “I just don’t want to be like them,” I said. My brothers are all narrow-minded individuals. They always think that it’s good to worship the sun but examining its components, structure and the law of heat is pretty sure to be a crime.
Their high priest who leads the religious sun worship ceremony never fails to solicit offerings for their sun god. Fees for the prayers that we get during the ceremony. And when my poor grandfather died. We went to the office of the religion of the Sun to ask for a small request. To have a prayer service for my grandfather, we thought that their service would be free of charge for it is very obvious that free service should be given if you work for the sun god.
I assumed that they’ll inquire where my dead grandfather was buried but instead they asked for a fee, they explained to me that we should pay first before they will give the service that I think should be free of charge. Then we paid
We waited for their arrival. At last, they came and now my dead grandfather who was a devotee to the sun god will get the prayers that he deserve, prayers that came from the heart, quality prayers, unique prayers, prayers that will give his restless soul a breather. But everything seems to be so different and I was disappointed. The high priest and his acolytes were uttering words that I couldn’t understand, unfamiliar words that only the high priest and his acolytes could only comprehend. My mother said it’s the sun language.
Moments later I was surprised because the prayers they were saying are being repeated countless times like a broken record. And to make it worst, the prayers were only being read, I thought they’d give my grandfather a prayer that came from their heart. My grandpa was a devotee to your sun god and this how you’ll repay him? Repeated prayers from a small book? Where’s sincerity in it? But I can’t do anything….
My beloved Jesus Christ never solicited fees for the prayers he gave to the people, Jesus never asked money when he raised Lazarus from the dead, Jesus never asked a fee when he healed the leper Lazarus nor a fee for the sick and the blind that Jesus healed. Even John the Baptist who is only a human being did not asked for a charge on the River Jordan. My God! What’s wrong with this religion, the Sun religion!
Their high priests wont stir a foot unless being paid! Not to mention this religion even sells pendants with the sun god decorated on it, scapulars, sun god rosaries and other things, which only are schemes to generate money. They even make images of their gods and sell them to their loyal subjects, images that which they knelt unto and prayed if their sick and troubled, why can’t they just pray without these statues and pictures of their sun god?
What hit me the most is the images and statues of the sun god and its disciples, which they placed in their house of prayer ….so I opened up my Bible, the King James Version that I always read.
Exodus 20:4 so I read “ Thou shall not make unto thee any graven image, or any likeness of anything that is in heaven above, or that is in the earth beneath, or that is in the water under the earth”
Does this sun religion that my brothers are so into is making the biggest error of today? So I read my Bible again
Deuteronomy 4:16 “Lest ye be corrupted yourselves, and make you a graven image, the similitude of any figure, the likeness of male or female”
As I read this in front of my brothers, they mocked me…. but I read again
Deuteronomy 7:25 “ the graven images of their gods shall ye be burn with fire: thou shalt not desire the silver or gold that on them, nor take it unto thee, lest thou be snared therein: for it is an abomination to the Lord thy God.”
Leviticus 26:1 it says “Ye shall make no idols nor graven image, neither rear you up a standing image, neither shall ye set up any image of stone in your land, to bow down unto it: for I am the Lord your God”
“So obvious,” I said. To make them understand more, I opened another page in my Bible
Isaiah 44: 10-11 “ Who hath formed a god, or molten a graven image that is profitable for nothing? Behold, all his fellows should be ashamed: and the workmen, they are of men: let them all be gathered together, let them stand up; yet they shall fear, and they shall be shamed together.”
So I asked my brothers, do you even know how your sun god looked like? And they replied nothing. So I read gain
John 4:24 “ God is a spirit: and they that worship him must worship him in spirit and in truth.”
Acts 17:29 “ Forasmuch then as we are the offspring of God, we ought not to think that the Godhead is like unto gold, or silver, or stone, graven by art and man’s device.”
So I talked to my brothers, I told to them that the real religion doesn’t require you to pay fees for the prayers and services that they give nor keep graven images in their homes and their house of prayers, nor even sell things that are related to religion that would only produce dirty money. Your sun religion is not the kind of thing that you must be in…my brothers, open up your mind and put into your thoughts that its not a crime to study and analyze the laws of God, it would be an insult to God if you only admire him for the beautiful garden that he made and not to study and debate why those flowers and plants are arranged that way, why the stones are placed here and not there. God gave us brains to think and not follow the trend just because everyone’s into it.
If you’re a member of the Sun religion or wants to join them, better think twice my friend, you might be making the worst mistake in your life.
I gave them a smile, I turned my back, and left, leaving my Bible open for them to read, study and analyze.
xxxEndxxx
thanks for reading
please help me
My first written story, please read this one guys and comment ^ ^ its my skull project.
The Sun Religion
By: Israel
Most of my brothers are full of goodness, full of sacredness, devoutness and piety but I never wanted to be one of them, they insult me, they are rude, they upset my feelings because they think I am an idiot, ignorant and empty minded. “I just don’t want to be like them,” I said. My brothers are all narrow-minded individuals. They always think that it’s good to worship the sun but examining its components, structure and the law of heat is pretty sure to be a crime.
Their high priest who leads the religious sun worship ceremony never fails to solicit offerings for their sun god. Fees for the prayers that we get during the ceremony. And when my poor grandfather died. We went to the office of the religion of the Sun to ask for a small request. To have a prayer service for my grandfather, we thought that their service would be free of charge for it is very obvious that free service should be given if you work for the sun god.
I assumed that they’ll inquire where my dead grandfather was buried but instead they asked for a fee, they explained to me that we should pay first before they will give the service that I think should be free of charge. Then we paid
We waited for their arrival. At last, they came and now my dead grandfather who was a devotee to the sun god will get the prayers that he deserve, prayers that came from the heart, quality prayers, unique prayers, prayers that will give his restless soul a breather. But everything seems to be so different and I was disappointed. The high priest and his acolytes were uttering words that I couldn’t understand, unfamiliar words that only the high priest and his acolytes could only comprehend. My mother said it’s the sun language.
Moments later I was surprised because the prayers they were saying are being repeated countless times like a broken record. And to make it worst, the prayers were only being read, I thought they’d give my grandfather a prayer that came from their heart. My grandpa was a devotee to your sun god and this how you’ll repay him? Repeated prayers from a small book? Where’s sincerity in it? But I can’t do anything….
My beloved Jesus Christ never solicited fees for the prayers he gave to the people, Jesus never asked money when he raised Lazarus from the dead, Jesus never asked a fee when he healed the leper Lazarus nor a fee for the sick and the blind that Jesus healed. Even John the Baptist who is only a human being did not asked for a charge on the River Jordan. My God! What’s wrong with this religion, the Sun religion!
Their high priests wont stir a foot unless being paid! Not to mention this religion even sells pendants with the sun god decorated on it, scapulars, sun god rosaries and other things, which only are schemes to generate money. They even make images of their gods and sell them to their loyal subjects, images that which they knelt unto and prayed if their sick and troubled, why can’t they just pray without these statues and pictures of their sun god?
What hit me the most is the images and statues of the sun god and its disciples, which they placed in their house of prayer ….so I opened up my Bible, the King James Version that I always read.
Exodus 20:4 so I read “ Thou shall not make unto thee any graven image, or any likeness of anything that is in heaven above, or that is in the earth beneath, or that is in the water under the earth”
Does this sun religion that my brothers are so into is making the biggest error of today? So I read my Bible again
Deuteronomy 4:16 “Lest ye be corrupted yourselves, and make you a graven image, the similitude of any figure, the likeness of male or female”
As I read this in front of my brothers, they mocked me…. but I read again
Deuteronomy 7:25 “ the graven images of their gods shall ye be burn with fire: thou shalt not desire the silver or gold that on them, nor take it unto thee, lest thou be snared therein: for it is an abomination to the Lord thy God.”
Leviticus 26:1 it says “Ye shall make no idols nor graven image, neither rear you up a standing image, neither shall ye set up any image of stone in your land, to bow down unto it: for I am the Lord your God”
“So obvious,” I said. To make them understand more, I opened another page in my Bible
Isaiah 44: 10-11 “ Who hath formed a god, or molten a graven image that is profitable for nothing? Behold, all his fellows should be ashamed: and the workmen, they are of men: let them all be gathered together, let them stand up; yet they shall fear, and they shall be shamed together.”
So I asked my brothers, do you even know how your sun god looked like? And they replied nothing. So I read gain
John 4:24 “ God is a spirit: and they that worship him must worship him in spirit and in truth.”
Acts 17:29 “ Forasmuch then as we are the offspring of God, we ought not to think that the Godhead is like unto gold, or silver, or stone, graven by art and man’s device.”
So I talked to my brothers, I told to them that the real religion doesn’t require you to pay fees for the prayers and services that they give nor keep graven images in their homes and their house of prayers, nor even sell things that are related to religion that would only produce dirty money. Your sun religion is not the kind of thing that you must be in…my brothers, open up your mind and put into your thoughts that its not a crime to study and analyze the laws of God, it would be an insult to God if you only admire him for the beautiful garden that he made and not to study and debate why those flowers and plants are arranged that way, why the stones are placed here and not there. God gave us brains to think and not follow the trend just because everyone’s into it.
If you’re a member of the Sun religion or wants to join them, better think twice my friend, you might be making the worst mistake in your life.
I gave them a smile, I turned my back, and left, leaving my Bible open for them to read, study and analyze.
xxxEndxxx
thanks for reading
Normal is synonymous to boring
Without even reading your post (too much damn reading anyways... 
) I would suggest to do some research on the Aztecs and the Mayans Part of their culture is actually based on the Sun Gods.
iRO Chaos Characters:
IdyotAko - 99/67 Lord Knight.............................Aima Lichu - 75/45 Sage
Aeag Sedah - 73/39 High Wizard................................Aima Taikdat - 81/50 Gank Rogue
Vendi Productus - 95/44 Forge Blacksmith.............Aima Bardu - 57/26 MS Bard
I_R_teh_1337!!! - 90/46 FS Priest.......................Aima Whupyah - 61/46 Battle Acolyte (Monk)
mAnUnUmPiT - 73/45 Hunter..............................Aima Alchy - 99/50 Battle Alchemist
) I would suggest to do some research on the Aztecs and the Mayans Part of their culture is actually based on the Sun Gods.iRO Chaos Characters:
IdyotAko - 99/67 Lord Knight.............................Aima Lichu - 75/45 Sage
Aeag Sedah - 73/39 High Wizard................................Aima Taikdat - 81/50 Gank Rogue
Vendi Productus - 95/44 Forge Blacksmith.............Aima Bardu - 57/26 MS Bard
I_R_teh_1337!!! - 90/46 FS Priest.......................Aima Whupyah - 61/46 Battle Acolyte (Monk)
mAnUnUmPiT - 73/45 Hunter..............................Aima Alchy - 99/50 Battle Alchemist
And Egyptians. Don't forget Egyptians. Have you noticed all three...okay. Add Incas...all four cultures make use of pyramids?
and japan too....
amaterasu legend
teh moon and sun thing
i'll read it later izzy... if i have gime... lol
your starting sentence area really long run-on sentence... put a comma or dot in it
amaterasu legend
teh moon and sun thingi'll read it later izzy... if i have gime... lol
your starting sentence area really long run-on sentence... put a comma or dot in it
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