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I'm currently working on a small project for finally having (or going to have) 2 000 pageviews on my deviantART page. I've got some progress with some changes in my sketchpad now but it's never too late to show you a draft I made some time ago (last night, actually):

How do you think? Although I or someone else already found some mistakes (like those arms), do you still find anything you like me to improve? Please, I need it so don't hesitate to point it out for me. Thanks in advance.

How do you think? Although I or someone else already found some mistakes (like those arms), do you still find anything you like me to improve? Please, I need it so don't hesitate to point it out for me. Thanks in advance.
Just practice on it. Heck, I'm not even THAT good.
I think he's saying you're better. You are pretty talented, you don't have to always act modest 

Food for thought:
- The three most important things are: love, knowledge, and truth.
- To be remembered is to live forever.
- It's all about perspective, try to be grateful about life.
- Love happens by accident
Gaming:
DMS3 Modchipped PS2Slimline FTW, the Wii is cool too

- The three most important things are: love, knowledge, and truth.
- To be remembered is to live forever.
- It's all about perspective, try to be grateful about life.
- Love happens by accident
Gaming:
DMS3 Modchipped PS2Slimline FTW, the Wii is cool too


Actually, I was just saying he could always practice so he could draw bodies too. 

o.O
i can draw head ok....
but bodies? LOL!!! it's mishapen! like... not even a human being...
and the hand... and the feet.... and the torso.... ugh.....
i can draw head ok....
but bodies? LOL!!! it's mishapen! like... not even a human being...
and the hand... and the feet.... and the torso.... ugh.....
Stop being in denial. Even I didn't start out that great, y'know? It's your choice. You could start by shaping out the body of a standing man. No poses. Just standing. That's how I started out and it looked horrible when I first drew it (haha). Go get references if you have to. 3-D shapes works too.
What's the story behind those characters?
Oh yeah,
2000MEANS 2000 pageviews in my deviantART page. GOT THAT?
Edited by Kinju
Oh yeah,
2000MEANS 2000 pageviews in my deviantART page. GOT THAT?
Edited by Kinju
Story behind those characters, eh? Well, for starters, they're, or rather the one on the left is my very first original character. Yep. In spite of the two being twins, I originally settled for one.
Yeah. Twins. Both are attending high school. The one on the left is Gen Murasaki. The one on the right is Gan Murasaki. Gen is the slightly elder brother, a scholar in swimming, gets good grades, and musically-inclined but can easily falter emotionally. Gan is the slightly younger brother, good at basketball and loud-mouthed but strong-willed, and has a crush on a girl who has a crush on his brother, who in turn, has a crush on her sister. As if that wasn't enough, Gan also has a rival regarding his crush...
It's a really old and complicated story, actually. I remember I was in the 4th grade when I first sketched Gen and 5th grade when I started creating a solid storyline for them. I'm 2nd year college now.
Yeah. Twins. Both are attending high school. The one on the left is Gen Murasaki. The one on the right is Gan Murasaki. Gen is the slightly elder brother, a scholar in swimming, gets good grades, and musically-inclined but can easily falter emotionally. Gan is the slightly younger brother, good at basketball and loud-mouthed but strong-willed, and has a crush on a girl who has a crush on his brother, who in turn, has a crush on her sister. As if that wasn't enough, Gan also has a rival regarding his crush...
It's a really old and complicated story, actually. I remember I was in the 4th grade when I first sketched Gen and 5th grade when I started creating a solid storyline for them. I'm 2nd year college now.
Kinju said:Sounds like a DNAngel love qudrangle!
BTW, you erased my humurous 300 reference post.
raywindz64th said:BTW, you erased my humurous 300 reference post.
Believe me. I had this storyline way before I knew DNAngel. And, no duh. I expected serious replies in this thread. You may spam elsewhere but not here. You forget that I can delete and edit your posts at my will.
Edit: I rushed since I'll be leaving the beloved scanner of my cousin in a few days. I made only minor alterations but the final(?) piece can be seen here: [link]
Okay I have a question; the girl who's in love with one of the twins, how does she knows it's not the other twin trying to pass himself off as his brother?
Hmmmm Something is wrong with Gan's crotch area... it seems his butt on one side is uh... deformed?
kalajel said:Oh she hell knows. I made sure you would only mistake them at first glance but the way they talk and move are completely different.
anadorn said:I kind of fixed that, trading it for crappy coloring. As I said: [link]
I like the colored one but why they don't have fingers? 

It's all about pirates in pj's!
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